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100 word story
I just couldn't eat something so horrible. I was at a really nice restaurant in Australia trying some ribs with my family. And finally the food came I took a big bite out of the ribs and it was disgusting it tasted like chewy chicken I had to go to the bathroom I vomited all over the floor. when I got out the bathroom my mum asked me what happened and i said I puked all over the floor. So we left my parents were annoyed that we ordered heaps delicious of food and didn't even eat it.
