Sick sentences

KEY: Red sentences are sick

KEY:BLack sentences are fixed

Sam and the skydivers held on to each other. They were high up. It was scary.Sam and the skydiver gripped tightly  onto each other's arms they were as high as the clouds And it was terrifying to look down,

The boy held out some food. The dragon ate it. He was green and had horns

The disgusting boy held out a lot of food The humongous ugly dragon ate it He was dark green and had horns as sharp as a knife.

It was really stormy

As the night went on the storm grew bigger and bigger

The sea was rough and there were big waves.

The sea was pounding and crashing over the ship

The waves hit the ship

The waves smashed and crashed against the ship

Fair play speech

Sport in New Zealand  is a religion!  We all play it at primary school right through to adulthood. But as supporters our behaviour leaves a lot to be desired throwing abuse towards referees and people who are out there doing it is unacceptable. fair play is integrity, solidarity, tolerance, care, excellence and joy, are the building blocks of fair play that can be experienced and learnt both on and off the field.

In 2015 the New zealand  rugby union created a programme called APPLAUD. Encouraging positive sideline support, if the sideline supporters are using inappropriate language towards players, coaches, officials and spectators.they are given a lollipop to eat   so they stop abusing people from the sideline.

At any sports game  on a saturday or sunday there's  always  

abuse coming from the sideline,  and it's mostly from adults shouting at their children and then kids that are trying their best feel disappointed when they are being shouted at.

When I am playing  soccer I feel disappointed when I am trying my best and people are abusing me like swearing,shouting and booing me all of my other teammates feel bad aswell when they are being abused.How would you feel if you were being abused by someone ?

Referees

The boof heads on the sideline give the referees a lot of abuse. They give up their time to ref your sport and then everyone is shouting at them. Just recently, a top NZ referee was booed and supporters blamed him for the loss. In my opinion, Referees need to be respected more. if there is no referee no one could play the game.

Conclusion

I think that sideline supporters need to respect players,coaches and officials Because they use their spare time to coach and referee you're game and if they're not being respected their will be no referee and you won't be able to play

maths prototec

Here is my maths prototec of the 2-9 times tables

Here is my prototec maths certificate

popplet

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

Success criteria

Use a variety of sentence beginnings

Use punctuation                                                                                                                                                                         

Add adjectives and verbs

Use a variety of sentence lengths   

100 word story

I just couldn't eat something so horrible. I was at a really nice restaurant in Australia trying some ribs with my family. And finally the food came I  took a big bite out of the ribs and it was disgusting it tasted like chewy chicken I had to go to the bathroom I vomited all over the floor.  when I got out the bathroom my mum asked me what happened and i said I puked all over the floor. So we left    my parents were annoyed that we ordered heaps  delicious of food and didn't even eat it.

my learning style

cockroaches

                                                               WHAREROA FARM

On friday the 17th of june we arrived at whareroa farm.

We rock up in the bus we all get out and sit in the shed and  Jan told us the rules and we split up into groups and went off. I was in a group with Tyler,Joe,Cory,Wiari and Linda.We  we had to walk down a gravel track then went to the picnic table.

And we had to listen to Mrs Whyte and all the other  adults and then Mrs Whyte Asked what group wanted to do the dell  and so our group said that we would do it so as soon then we headed off to find the pegs. Here is a picture

Then we crossed a 6 metre wide river and went up a huge hill it was steep finally

wiari spotted they first peg the letter was (A) and then      we had a selfie with the peg it was so funny.And then

After that we went for a walk up the hill with our whole group the  letter of our group was  (D) when we got up the hill we took some photos and answered some questions and then walked back down the hill.

Then we did a water experiment we walked into the river

With a bucket and a net and collected water in the bucket and then pulled the net up stream and caught bugs then we went back to the table and got the magnifying glass and looked at the bugs and identified what bugs they were we caught a stonefly.

Here's  is a picture of one of the weta houses.

                                   

we went into the forest and we looked at the weta homes there was a lot of wetas  in their houses  they were big!!

Here is our group on the top of the hill looking for a water catchment.