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Wednesday, 31 May 2017
I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.
Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths
100 word story
I just couldn't eat something so horrible. I was at a really nice restaurant in Australia trying some ribs with my family. And finally the food came I took a big bite out of the ribs and it was disgusting it tasted like chewy chicken I had to go to the bathroom I vomited all over the floor. when I got out the bathroom my mum asked me what happened and i said I puked all over the floor. So we left my parents were annoyed that we ordered heaps delicious of food and didn't even eat it.
Thursday, 16 March 2017
Sunday, 26 June 2016
WHAREROA FARM
On friday the 17th of june we arrived at whareroa farm.
We rock up in the bus we all get out and sit in the shed and Jan told us the rules and we split up into groups and went off. I was in a group with Tyler,Joe,Cory,Wiari and Linda.We we had to walk down a gravel track then went to the picnic table.
And we had to listen to Mrs Whyte and all the other adults and then Mrs Whyte Asked what group wanted to do the dell and so our group said that we would do it so as soon then we headed off to find the pegs. Here is a picture
Then we crossed a 6 metre wide river and went up a huge hill it was steep finally
wiari spotted they first peg the letter was (A) and then we had a selfie with the peg it was so funny.And then
After that we went for a walk up the hill with our whole group the letter of our group was (D) when we got up the hill we took some photos and answered some questions and then walked back down the hill.
Then we did a water experiment we walked into the river
With a bucket and a net and collected water in the bucket and then pulled the net up stream and caught bugs then we went back to the table and got the magnifying glass and looked at the bugs and identified what bugs they were we caught a stonefly.
Here's is a picture of one of the weta houses.
we went into the forest and we looked at the weta homes there was a lot of wetas in their houses they were big!!
Here is our group on the top of the hill looking for a water catchment.
Tuesday, 24 May 2016
At my house Lightning struck my sister was crying and my dog was barking I said” it's not scary you don't need to cry it's only lightning.
Then we looked on www.stuff.co.nz and 57 people got struck by lightning and they died and my sister was scared of the rain and she never went outside again until
She was 21.
And she was scared for 21 years and there was never thunder or lightning!!!!!!!
Wednesday, 18 May 2016
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