KEY: Red sentences are sick
KEY:BLack sentences are fixed
Sam and the skydivers held on to each other. They were high up. It was scary.Sam and the skydiver gripped tightly onto each other's arms they were as high as the clouds And it was terrifying to look down,
The boy held out some food. The dragon ate it. He was green and had horns
The disgusting boy held out a lot of food The humongous ugly dragon ate it He was dark green and had horns as sharp as a knife.
It was really stormy
As the night went on the storm grew bigger and bigger
The sea was rough and there were big waves.
The sea was pounding and crashing over the ship
The waves hit the ship
The waves smashed and crashed against the ship
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